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Wednesday 28 June 2017

100 WC:

This week's prompt was about a dramatic weather change. I was focusing on improving punctuation - we are learning how to use semi-colons. I was also trying to use better words. What do you think?

As I was walking down the street I was watching 3 now, as I saw breaking news topic  a dramatic change to the weather was made, it was fatal, Mike Puru the weather man died  in a fight with his partner and fell on the road and a truck ran him over  and  killed him. His life on being on reality shows like the bachelor and 3 news, was over. Telling girls to leave the bachelor mansion was over; 19 I don't know to 2017. One News  quote was "Love a little, laugh a lot, be Mike's partner, drop him".

1 comment:


  1. Hi Flynn,

    I like your sentences Mike Puru the weather man died in a fight with his partner and fell on the road and a truck ran him over and killed him. Mike Puru the weather man died in a fight with his partner and fell on the road and a truck ran him over and killed him. It is cool

    Blake
    Room 4
    Drummond

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